Saturday 14 September 2024

If at first you don't succeed... by Lynne Benton

If this blog should sound vaguely familiar, that's because it is: I first wrote, and publshed, it three years ago.  However, there is a reason - or actually, two reasons - for republishing it now.

1) Because I've been too busy finishing my novel to come up with another fresh idea.
and 
2) Because I'm about to start sending said novel out on submission, and this is just the blog I need to remind myself of the golden rule:

If at first you don't succeed, TRY, TRY AGAIN!


All writers get rejections, right?  They are never nice, but we just have to get used to them.  But does getting a rejection from a publisher mean our work is no good?

Not necessarily.

I recently came across a list of famous books which had originally been rejected by publishers, and found it quite fascinating.  For example, how could anyone have decided that Kenneth Grahame’s The Wind in the Willows wasn’t good enough?

Originally Grahame made up stories of Mole, Ratty, Badger and Toad for his four-year-old son as bedtime stories, but when he took early retirement from his job at the Bank of England, he used these bedtime stories as a basis for The Wind in the Willows.  However, a number of publishers rejected the manuscript before it was finally accepted and published in 1908. 


The public, of course, loved it, and The Wind in the Willows was subsequently listed as one of the Top Ten Books of All Time!

Another book which nearly didn’t make it was Agatha Christie’s The Mysterious Affair at Styles.  This was the first of her many crime novels featuring the indomitable Hercule Poirot, inspired by an influx of Belgian refugees into the UK after the First World War.  The manuscript was rejected by two publishers before being accepted by a third, after she’d agreed to making slight changes to the ending.  It was finally published in the US in October 1920, and in the UK in 1921, and this and many of her subsequent Poirot novels have been filmed and televised numerous times.  In fact, David Suchet has filmed every one of the Poirot stories for television.  Imagine if Agatha Christie hadn’t persisted with her first book in the series, maybe  nobody would have ever heard of Hercule Poirot!


Given the difficulties faced by women doing anything outside the home in the early 19th century, it is good to know that at least Jane Austen’s family believed in her work.  In 1793 her father thought enough of Pride and Prejudice, which she’d read aloud to the family, to ask a publisher if he would like to publish it.  It was, however, firmly rejected by return, and was only published in 1813, after the success of Sense and Sensibility


Later, in 1803, her brother Henry offered the ms of Northanger Abbey to Crosby & Company, a London publisher, who paid £10 for the copyright and promised early publication, but did nothing more with it.  In 1809 Jane wrote an angry letter to Richard Crosby, offering him a rewritten version of the novel if needed to secure its immediate publication.  If he didn’t want it, she requested the return of the original so she could find another publisher. Crosby loftily replied that he had not agreed to publish the book by any particular time, or at all, and that she could repurchase the manuscript for the £10 he had paid her brother, and then she could find another publisher. Sadly she couldn’t afford to buy it back until 1816, so it wasn’t finally published, along with Persuasion, until after her death in 1817.


And these are not the only examples of famous books initially rejected.  Who can forget the story of a young orphaned wizard at boarding school, which was rejected several times before a brave publisher took a chance on it…

All of which I find immensely cheering.  The main message seems to be, “if at first you don’t succeed, try, try, try again!”  So good luck to all writers out there, keep sending your work out, and just remember those best-sellers which were initially rejected!

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Friday 13 September 2024

Too Wizard for Words -- My Love Affair with the Girls' School Story

What is it about boarding school stories? I know I would have hated boarding school and yet I’ve had a love affair with their fictional counterparts for fifty years, and I know I’m not alone.


It started with Malory Towers when I was six. From the moment I met Darrell, admiring her brand-new school uniform in the mirror, I was hooked on school stories. 



The girls’ adventures seemed perfectly poised between realism and romance. Their friendships and rivalries, dreams and disappointments, were entirely believable, while the very idea of a remote Cornish boarding school with rocky sea-swimming pool and stables, was, as Darrell and her friends would have said, ‘too wizard for words!’


 

From Malory Towers it was a natural progression to St Clare’s and then – oh joy of joys! – the Chalet School, which had 59 books. They weren’t all available in Belfast in the eighties, and maybe the decades-long quest to collect the whole series is what kept me reading and collecting school stories all through my teenage years, when I knew I was meant to read about boys and discos, and beyond. I even, as a student, wrote a PhD thesis about girls’ school stories – those for grown-ups as well as for children. I’ve never minded what age a story is supposed to be for. Maybe that’s why I write books for children, teenagers and adults.




The schools I went to weren’t at all like Malory Towers or the Chalet School. My secondary school, Victoria College, Belfast, had a boarding department, but we daygirls were never allowed inside. The corridors were lined with old photos of hockey teams and prefects from the past – I used to spend breaktimes gazing at them, imagining the lives of those long-ago girls with their tunics and bobbed hair. They looked so like the girls in the stories I still (secretly) loved.




When I became an English teacher I spent a year as a mistress in the girls’ boarding department. That wasn’t much like the school stories either but there were midnight feasts and Matrons (one cosy, one scary) and bedtime cocoa. But a year was enough for me. 



And so to Fernside. I had always wanted to write a girls’ school story, and I sneaked some school-story elements into some of my earlier historical novels – Name upon Name is set partly in a school, and Hope against Hope in a girls’ hostel. And then, in an Irish Times interview about another book, I was asked why I’d never written a girls’ school story, given that I had a such an interest in them. I said I would love to write one! Little did I know that someone at O’Brien Press would read the interview, and think, A school story by Sheena Wilkinson? We might like to publish that…

 


Fernside, a boarding and day school beside the River Lagan, is imaginary, but it’s very like a lot of the girls’ schools that sprang up in the late 19th and early 20th centuries. Of course there are dormitories and prefects, lessons and sport, friendships and fallings-out – and a bit of mystery too. I’ve loved writing all my books, but in many ways First Term at Fernside is the book I started dreaming about all those years ago, when I was six, and I first looked into the mirror with Darrell. 


It's out on the 23rd September and I’m hoping that, for many young readers, it might be their first foray into a lifetime of love for the girls’ school story. And I hope that for many older readers, it will be a nostalgic treat! 

 

As for me, well, all the best school stories are in series, so you'll find me at my desk today, halfway through Fernside Book 2. But that, as Kipling says, is another story. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Monday 9 September 2024

Negotiating winter (Anne Rooney)




This morning there's a slug inside the door and a lot of water outside it. A bit of a brown tinge to the tree over the road. Still not properly light at 6am. We have to face it, summer is over and winter is just around the corner. 

Winter and I have never been friends. I spent my whole childhood with chapped and bleeding knuckles from being out in the cold winds. I remember once dropping a mitten at school, and then about six inches of snow fell. I spent ages hunting (fruitlessly) for it on the playing field. Of course it was fruitless; why didn't anyone tell me that I wouldn't be able to see a mitten under six inches of snow? Now a five-year-old would NOT be allowed to roam a snow-covered field for 20 minutes unsupervised, but that was then...

As this winter sneaks up, I find myself trying to plan whether to carry on working in my garden office, which is warm enough if I turn the heating on before I take MB to school, and cheap enough if I then turn it off and snuggle under a heated throw all day, or whether to go to the University Library which is heated for free but is a cold 5-km cycle ride away and where the coffee is not free. 

Most writers are entirely used to working wrapped in blankets, wearing fingerless gloves and a hat, or sometimes waddling around in a sleeping bag with holes cut for the feet. It's not something we look forward to, though.

 

But this is the year I thought I'd made friends with the cold. I spent part of July in Greenland, exploring pack ice, glaciers, icebergs and the ice sheet in perpetual daylight. In February I hope to go to northern Norway and explore the ice in perpetual darkness (not sure how much exploring will be possible in the dark, though). So why am I now glowering at the thermometer as I shake moths out of my jumpers? 


It puts me in mind of my neighbour, Keith. His wife is very fond of holidays, and books about six a year going to places like the Canary Isles and Portugal — not known for being cold. He says  he has a great time. But if I see him here when it's 28 °C he grumbles that it's too hot, just as I will grumble that a British winter is too cold. 

So perhaps it's down to choice. If I choose to go where the ice is kilometres thick, the cold is part of the deal. If Keith chooses to roast on a beach, it's good that it's hot. 

 


Maybe I need to convince myself I've chosen the cold. I could (in theory) go somewhere warm for the winter months. (OK, I couldn't, but let's pretend Brexit didn't happen and I have endless funds and no school run.) I will choose to think of it as snuggling inside a blankety coccoon. And when I come back from Norway it will seem warm, surely?

For now, I've thrown the slug outside. It can do its own negotiation with winter.

 

 

 

 

 

(Top three photos taken in Ilulissat, Greenland; bottom photo taken in a fjord near Nuuk)

Anne Rooney

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Out 30th September:  Weird and Wonderful Animal Facts, illustrated, by Ro Ledesma, Arcturus





Sunday 8 September 2024

Just one thing by Keren David

 Apologies, but today I'm going to write about my adventures with collage  -  oh no, not AGAIN, I hear you say -  but to be honest I'm not really doing any writing at all beyond journalism, right now, and  if I go down that route, we're going to get to some very dark places very quickly, and right now -  I'd rather not. It's hard enough doing it as a day job, and then lying awake all night thinking about....but no, let's talk about collage.

So, just a recap, I started doing mixed media collage in July 2023 when some lovely friends paid for me to do a short course at City Lit which is a college in central London offering all kinds of short courses for adults - if you've dreamed of doing virtually anything new, it's a great place to start. I was an utter novice in 2023, but loved it, and kept going all year -  and then treated myself to the same course again this year. It's an intense course -  6-9pm Monday to Thursday - but I was keen to see what it would be like to repeat the experience, this time with a bit more knowledge of what I was doing.

Day one I got a lovely surprise -  and a link to children's writing (At LAST!)  -  Penny Joelson, the very talented YA writer who teaches various creative writing courses at City Lit, was doing the course too. It was lovely to share the experience with her, and we set about cutting and sticking while trying not to talk shop about publishing.

We did various projects during the week, but the one which stood out for me -  and the one which I can't stop making -  was making collages with postcards. 'The rule,' said our teacher, the artists Simon English, 'is to just use one technique on each postcard. Just do one thing, and see how you can transform them.'

Now it so happened that I had a pack of postcards (ordered from Amazon) of landscapes. Perfect for this exercise. And I loved it. Here are some of the postcards I've altered on the course and since:







I love the simplicity of the idea -  just do one thing. I love the way you can find echoes in a landscape with something completely different. And I love the idea of quickly made art, that can be done in a matter of minutes. Sometimes that's all I have.
What to do with all my postcards? I've made 50 so far. I've photographed them all, and may get some printed up as  -  hmm -  postcards. Some I've given to friends. And some friends have been roped into a new project -  I send them postcards, they send me back unembellished cards representing where they live or come from or a place they love,  and then I will combine them to make a bigger piece of art.
That last idea reminded me of my first book and how it started out as an exercise in another classroom -  this one Amanda Swift's Writing for Children class at City University.  We all had to create characters and then get into pairs and put our characters together into a plot for a YA novel. My character was a boy in witness protection, I paired with Amanda, and her character was a girl training for the Paralympics. She was kind enough to let me take her character into my book when I was excited by the plot we created, it was the first time I'd ever seen how a book might be made.
Postcards have two sides, of course. They're perfect for writing ideas on, or making character outlines. Not too big, or scarily demanding, able to be changed and embellished, stuck together and shuffled. Maybe that's another next step for me. Because I do want to start writing again...once I've made a few more postcards

Friday 6 September 2024

Walking Home from School—Then and Now—by Paul May

A dozen Carnegie winners.
Look Both Ways by Jason Reynolds won in 2021

On his website Jason Reynolds has a film, Dear Dreamer, (there's a link lower down) which was produced 'in collaboration with the hardworking students, educators and dreamers of Atlanta.' In the film he says 'I think I just want to create work which makes young people feel cared for.' This reminded me of Elizabeth Acevedo's statement that 'I hold young people more tenderly,' (than adult readers). She was suggesting, I think, that in her adult work she is more honest—things are less likely to turn out well there. She allows more hope to younger readers. 

Jason Reynolds means something different, or maybe something extra, because he does show great tenderness towards his characters. Bad things happen but people make it through by caring for each other. The extra thing he's saying is that by writing about the lives of people just like his readers he is caring for them. 'I want people to read it and think . . . yo, this feels real.'

You might expect that characters who feel real to readers in the inner city somewhere in the USA in 2021 wouldn't feel the same to a reader who grew up in a leafy dormitory village on the outskirts of London in the 1950s and yet in many ways they do. Look Both Ways is a collection of stories about things that happen during the journey from school to home. It's a great idea, and a far more straightforward way of freeing children from the tyranny of adult supervision than bumping off their parents in the first paragraph or two, as has been known to happen in children's fiction. And as soon as I'd finished reading, memories started bubbling up from my own childhood. Some of those events even echoed those in Look Both Ways.

Jason Reynolds says in Dear Dreamer: 'You knew who had the mean dogs and whose dog was always off the leash . . . You knew who had the rottweiler, who had the pitbull.' Well, we knew where the corgis lived. They were halfway up School Lane in a bungalow with a gate that was sometimes left open, and if it was open half a dozen corgis would race out, yapping and snapping at your ankles. You had to run fast. Not far beyond that bungalow there was a haunted house and then, after the abandoned orchard, was the main road where I once scared a driver into terrifying anger by (according to her) running in front of her car. I failed to look both ways. And then there was the conker tree incident, which gave me an early experience of betrayal and injustice.

I was walking home with my mate Chris (AKA Bubbles), exploring an alleyway we'd never taken before, when we looked over a gate and saw a conker tree on the opposite side of a field. As we were wondering whether it was OK to run across and grab some, a boy from the top class arrived and told us it was fine. So we went and fetched some high-class conkers and when we got back to the gate he was gone. 

The next morning in assembly the headteacher announced that he'd been watching from his office and seen two boys trespassing on the field behind the school. He demanded that the boys owned up, so of course we kept quiet. We'd heard that one before. But then that big boy who'd encouraged us put his hand up and said he knew who did it. What a creep! We both got the strap for that.

Later, we took a look at that conker tree and couldn't understand how we'd failed to notice that it was really just on the edge of the school field, and the evil headteacher would have had a great view. It was almost as if, on leaving the school gates and turning right instead of left we'd entered a different universe, disconnected from the one we normally lived in. And that's kind of what happens in Look Both Ways. You think things are separate but it turns out they're all connected.

That space between home and school is fascinating. It's a boundary zone, a no-man's-land, where all kinds of things can happen. It can be a time and space to make or cement friendships, or a time to learn to be independent. Walking home on your own for the first time is a big deal, as Fatima discovers in Look Both Ways. The first time she does it, Fatima falls and scrapes her knees and meets a crazy woman with pink trousers, but she doesn't tell her mother because 'that would be an end to the babysitterless life . . . and she didn't want that because even though that first walk was rough, anything was worth trying again if it meant she could come home and be alone in her house . . .'

Her mother says, when she hears about the knees, 'I keep telling you, you have to pay attention, sweetheart . . . You have to look both ways and all ways. That even includes, despite what your dad says, down.'

You need to pay attention when you read this book. There are ten linked stories about kids on their way home from school and the stories delve deep into the lives of those children and their families, but they do this with a very light touch. They observe something very important about school life, something I don't recall seeing explored before in this kind of detail, and something that it's very easy to forget about if you're an adult, and especially if you're a teacher. It's the fact that any given child only really knows a handful of the others in the class.

The different groups of kids and individuals intersect with each other throughout the book, so characters in one story appear in other stories but you see how those groups and kids are known to others only tangentially, by their reputations or by rumour. So, for example, in the book's second story there's a gang called the 'Low Cuts.' 

"All I can tell you is if you ever see John John Watson, Francy Baskin, Trista Smith, or especially Britton "Bit" Burns—the Low Cuts—better watch your pockets. These four, they'll steal anything that jingles." 

The Low Cuts steal small change wherever they can find it. No one but the Low Cuts knows why they do it. Nor does the reader until they reach the last page of the story. 

I started thinking about my own time at school. It’s true. I knew only my own small group of friends. Sure, there were others I played football with or had classes with, but they were like work colleagues, not friends. I knew their names because I heard the register in the mornings and I'd work with them if I had to, but there's an invisible barrier between association and friendship and I don't think it's just me being unsociable. From each class I was in I can only remember a handful of people, and that goes for university too.

I value this book for the exceptional acuteness of its observation of children and the way they interact, for its humour and humanity, for the sharpness of its dialogue and for its delight in language—there's a wonderful stream-of-consciousness improvisation at the end on the theme of school buses which makes a great climax and pulls the whole thing together. Look Both Ways has qualities which I believe mean it will continue to be read for a long time, but that's not the intention of Jason Reynolds. Here's what he says at the end of Dear Dreamer

'I always say if my books are still being read forty years from now—in schools—they're still being taught—that the books that are introducing young people to literacy in schools—I've failed. Forty years from now we ain't figured out new books yet? Language is living, it's growing, it's expanding, it's changing, it's evolving. People are living and growing and changing and expanding and evolving. Books have to continue to do the exact same thing in order for me to see eye to eye with the young people.' 

(My transcription. Apologies for any errors. You can watch the video here.)

Reynolds's wariness about what happens to his books in schools is understandable, and his publishers, Simon and Schuster, clearly want to establish Look Both Ways as a feature of the curriculum. You might want to take a look at their comprehensive 'Reading Group Guide'. But the thing is, as an editor once said to me, books stick around for a long time. And although all that stuff about growing and changing and evolving is true, one thing I took from this book is that children don't change that much; human relations don't change that much. It's why we still read Shakespeare and Chaucer and Arthur Ransome and Noel Streatfeild. (There's a new production of Ballet Shoes at the National Theatre.) 

Sixty-odd years after I started walking home from school alone in an English village, kids are doing very similar things thousands of miles away on the other side of an ocean. And that's why I think this particular book will stick around to be read by the grandchildren of the kids who read it today.

Tuesday 3 September 2024

STORIES OF THE STONES: Men-an-Tol







MEN-AN-TOL

Photo taken this summer on my latest trip back "home".


Delving into the myths and legends of Cornwall recently has been a joy - none more so than the stories and superstitions surrounding the many ancient and enigmatic stones littered casually throughout the Cornish landscape.


I remember as a child happily crawling in and out of the mythical stone hole - old bones won't allow me that pleasure now, but I made a point of looking up the strange stories surrounding this odd monument.

Men-an-Tol is a small stone circle with a central holed stone.  It stands in dramatic, windswept, moorland beside a pathway leading off a minor road between Madron and Morvah in the far west of Cornwall. For generations it has enchanted and mystified people. 

It's supposed to have a fairy or piskie guardian who can conjure up miraculous cures. It's said that when evil piskies turned a woman's child into a changling, she put the baby through the stone and the evil spell was reversed.

Some of the many legends and beliefs are still held locally:

Healing: children passed through the hole nine times against the sun will be cured of rickets (the fact there there are no cases of rickets in Cornwall now may speak for its efficacy. 😆)

Astronomy: some say that the stone group was used as an astronomical observatory.

Fertility: A modern story insists that a woman passing through the stone seven times backwards during a full moon will become pregnant.

Divination: some believe that placing two brass pins on the stones and watching their movement can predict the future.

Portal: one of the strongest legends is that it serves a role as a portal into the land of fairies. Local folklore says passing through the holed stone nine times will give you the chance to have your greatest wishes granted too. 

Beyond these mysteries Men-an-Tol holds its own historical importance. It is believed to date back to the bronze age making it over 3,500 years old. Recent discovery of further buried stones beneath the turf has shed new light on the type of monument Men-anTol once was.

It was known in the past as the 'Devil's Eye' and the 'Crick Stone' and I think that its allure and dark mystique owes much to the timeless magic still swirling in the mists and moonlight of a wild Cornish moor.  




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Monday 2 September 2024

Reawakening? By Steve Way

Last month I was in a rush and to my eternal shame I forgot to thank Sue Purkiss, Claire Fayers and Penny Dolan, three wonderful ladies who helped a dam idiot in distress when I couldn't sign into Google and therefore the blog. Thank you all, I regret belatedly, for stepping so kindly into the breach. 

I noticed a news article this week describing how scientists have discovered complete copies of Mammoth DNA that had been perfectly preserved. It reminded me of a piece I wrote as part of an exercise in a writing group. I thought it would be fun to share it with you as, possibly, a salutary warning...

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Time Set: Future

Century: 22nd

Genre: Romance

Must include:

  A person who is startled or scared or in fear

 A woolly mammoth

A meteor strike

The Mammoth’s Tale.

Miranda and Alberto were gazing into the night sky, trunks entwined, tusk to tusk, watching the meteor storm.

‘I was so afraid when the reports showed that two of the largest meteors might hit the Earth… and make us extinct once again,’ said Alberto, tickling Miranda’s ear with the edge of his own… he really was a hopeless romantic.

‘One last bequest from humanity,’ replied Miranda grimly. ‘They sent up the last of their nuclear devices and after all this time they’ve blasted the two interstellar torpedoes that were heading this way…’

‘… which is why we’ve ended up enjoying this dazzling display rather than with a couple of devastating dents in the planet,’ continued Alberto, as so often, ending Miranda’s sentences with a more positive outlook than she was like to add.

‘It’s odd isn’t it. In several ways it’s been some of the worst aspects of the human civilisation that have ensured our survival,’ Alberto mused a little later after having untangled some of the knots in Miranda’s beautifully thick and course coat. ‘There were the warmongering humans who developed the nuclear missiles that saved us today, and the over-ambitious, greedy scientists, who tinkered with our DNA.’

Miranda snorted in agreement. Like most modern mammoths of the 22nd Century R.E. (Re-emergence) she despised the group of scientists that following the success of others to end their extinction had added a few human genes, linked to intelligence, into the mammoth genome. They had been hoping to create powerful intelligent beasts that could be trained to do their bidding, like-super intelligent dogs, not having predicted, as proved to be the case, that the products of their genetic meddling would be far more intelligent than themselves. Rather than the modified mammoths becoming intelligent slaves the tables were soon turned on the humans. However, as the humans proved pretty useless servants, and were basically not even edible, they were eventually left to survive in the few corners of the world not occupied by their new masters, which they didn’t.

‘They say our scientists have discovered some human DNA samples and are wondering whether we should end their extinction,’ Alberto told Miranda after offering her a cartload of delicious straw. He really knew how to treat a girl.

‘I hope they don’t,’ replied Miranda, somewhat predictably. ‘Those vile two-legged monstrosities made us extinct once, we don’t want to give them the chance to do it again. I know it’s unlikely but what if one of our scientists tried adding some of our genes to theirs? No. Leave their bones in the museums and their bodies in the permafrost where they left us.’

As he was steeling up the courage to propose Alberto didn’t think it would help to point out that it was in the permafrost where the humans found the bodies of the mammoths whose DNA they used to set off the glorious re-emergence.

‘Did I mention that my company brought a new prairie last week?’ he asked, building up to the big question…