Friday 27 May 2016

An Enjoyment of Editing - Lynn Huggins-Cooper

Surely I am not the only author to enjoy the editing phase? Reading posts on social media, you might get that impression. I read lots of groans and moaning about the time spent on this stage of writing. I have just finished writing my latest Young Adult novel, The Journey Jar. I say 'finished,' but well...not really.

I have written 72,000 words, but the novel isn't finished exactly. I now get to pore over the manuscript, killing my darlings, taking out any beloved words that have led to dreadful repetition and other dull things like that...but I also get to do the fun part. I get to make sure the narrative flows and hangs together; I can ensure (hopefully!) that themes are subtle and properly blended into the story - and sometimes I even discover new ones.  I think a book is about one thing, and then another theme bobs to the surface at the editing phase. I know my book is about the journey through loss; it's about identity and finding our 'tribe' in our friends and partners. It also explores the casual racism thrown at the Romany community. As I have started to read the manuscript through, I have found hints of undiscovered themes, such as a strong thread of colour that describes the way values and more are passed down through the generations.

My nanny, mum and uncle. 


It's easy to trace where this story comes from. It's a real 'heart story.' My mum died several years ago, and I have drawn on my experiences as a bereaved daughter as well as the emotions I see in my work as a grief counselor. Mum came from a Romany family. It was there in the piercing blue eyes and raven hair (which I sadly didn't inherit, but hey - you can't have it all!). My lovely father-in-law from my first marriage is from a gypsy family too. So it hurts on a personal as well as ideological level when I hear the prejudice still shown to gypsies today.

I am looking forward to the polishing, general mulling over and strengthening process of editing. Does that make me an odd-bod, or do other writers enjoy this stage too? See you on the other side...

4 comments:

Sue Purkiss said...

Love the title! I like editing too...

JO said...

I love editing - that's where I discover what I'm really trying to say!

Penny Dolan said...

I too enjoy the editing process, although it is sometimes scary when you realise quite which part of the dark pond this or that idea rose from! Certainly, a family there to treasure.

Sue Bursztynski said...

No, you're by no means the only one. Your story looks better for it. And when you've sold your story and an editor helps you to make it something you can be proud of - even better!