But I never found looking at the 3-Act structure helpful
while I was writing. That is, until I came across Mary Caroll Moore’s ‘W-plot’ structure.
Mary has written 13 books – most of them non-fiction – and,
interestingly, the W-plot structure applies to both fiction and non-fiction. I’m
using it myself now with books of both types. Mary has also published her own book called Your Book Starts Here: Create, Craft, and
Sell Your First Novel, Memoir, or Nonfiction Book, available in print and
on Kindle:
http://howtoplanwriteanddevelopabook.blogspot.co.uk/
Mary has also made a YouTube video about her W-plot here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pMhLvMJ_r0Y
Mary’s W-plot structure is ingenious because it shows how
the action in a story ascends or descends at different times. I interpret this as being the way a character is swept down by events on the descending leg of the W –
then moves upwards with new purpose on the ascending stroke.
The W-plot structure also nicely illustrates how characters
change their minds as a result of things that happen to them, and consequently
change the trajectory of the plot. The two major ‘turning points’ are represented by the
two bottom points of the W. These turning points occur in the 3-Act plot
structure as well. However, it was never clear to me (due to the linear way that the 3-Act
structure is usually presented) that the turning points are not so much a turning
point in the action of the story but a turning
point in the character’s own motivation. In other words, your characters
can change their minds.
Surprisingly – after five books – this came as a revelation
to me. I knew that my characters needed to change and develop over the course
of the story, but I had always been so concerned about knowing who my
characters were and keeping them ‘in character’ that I had not given them
enough freedom to do a complete about-turn and take the plot off in a new
direction.
So, although I still write my first drafts intuitively (as, indeed, Mary
Caroll Moore still advocates), I keep in mind the W-plot structure and ask
myself what it would take to make a character change their mind at a turning
point – and how it would affect things if they did.Heather Dyer - children's author and Royal Literary Fund Consultant Fellow
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6 comments:
Will take a closer look at this - thanks, Heather!
I'm going it investigate these links a bit more later. Yes, "the character changes their mind" is a nice way of explaining that plot needs to be internal as much as external - not just "half way up, the storm hit with ferocity" etc etc.
A point to bear in mind on this back to WIP work day.
Seems many of us are 're-working' !!! Thanks Heather.
I'll definitely look at this more closely - I'm reworking a book at the moment, and it has an annoying habit of losing its way. Thanks, Heather.
That's a remarkable diagram - it's true, you can take almost any good plot and it magically conforms to that rough sort of shape.
It's also true about characters - the biggest myth is that they have to be 'consistent'. Yeah right, and real people are so consistent, right? Well, the boring ones are. But what makes a person interesting is when they suddenly do something you never expected of them (and which yet, in hindsight, is not so big a surprise - like a previously ditzy mother suddenly proving brilliant in a crisis, if her children's safety is threatened.)
Good luck with your 'reworking', everyone. And yes, Nick, simple but effective isn't it? It really released me to allow my characters to behave inconsistently. And after all, how are they ever going to develop if they never change their behaviour from start to finish...
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