Showing posts with label prologues. Show all posts
Showing posts with label prologues. Show all posts

Saturday, 11 July 2020

This Be The Prologue: when family and literary values collide - Kelly McCaughrain

In a year of disturbing news, I’m going to share with you possibly the most disturbing thing I’ve heard. Maybe ever.

Having joined a book club for the first time in my whole life - and when I say ‘joined’, I mean ‘created’, ‘forced my family members into’ and ‘run like a dictator who gets to choose all the books’ (there are reasons I’ve never been in a book club before) – we had our first official meeting last month. It went surprisingly well. We had actual discussion about the actual book, instead of just drinking wine and chatting about how awful lockdown is (we met outdoors in a socially distant fashion). There was debate. There was dissention. There was pretty good Millionaire’s Shortbread.

And then it happened. 

Me: I think you were supposed to suspect that she was the murderer right from the start though.

Cousin: Why?

Me: Well, it was kind of set up in the prologue.

Cousin: Oh, I never read prologues.

Me:
I interrogated her for a further five minutes, sure there must be some mistake, but no, apparently it’s true. She NEVER READS PROLOGUES. Just skips them. Just turns the page and starts at chapter 1 like they don’t even exist.

Me: But… but… but… WHY?!

Cousin: Because they always give the plot away and I don’t want to know.

I then discovered that her ten year old son does exactly the same, for the same reasons! So maybe it's genetic.
I ranted a bit about prologues being part of the book, put there for good reasons by hardworking authors who know what they’re doing thank you very much. They set up an atmosphere. They introduce a theme. They hook the reader in. They do LOADS of stuff.

They also, to be fair, often give away the plot.

I’ve read loads of debates around whether or not you should use prologues, especially in YA, along the lines of ‘They’ve gone out of fashion, You can use them but only if they’re absolutely necessary, Agents hate them, They’re hard to do well, They’re information dumps, They can provide useful background, Reveal action the MC isn’t involved in, They can be set in the past or future or from another character’s POV, They foreshadow future events, Introduce the antagonist, Set up a paradox etc etc etc.

I’ve never heard anyone say, ‘What if readers just don’t bother reading them?’ But it’s the only argument that would make me seriously wary about ever using one.

It blows my mind that you’d skip a single word in a book. I’m not a skim reader. Even for the boring bits. I read the reviews at the start and the acknowledgements at the end. The idea of skipping a part of the story…? I mean what if you got right to the end and the entire book didn’t make any sense because you hadn’t read the prologue!!!
Although, that would never happen, would it? Which suggests that maybe they’re not actually that necessary at all. We’re told all the time, ‘if you can cut it, cut it’, so why do we use them?

So what do you think? To prologue or not to prologue? Do you write them? Do you read them? Would you be in a book club (or even a family) with someone who skips them?

Sorry Cuz, it's been great but we're done now








Kelly McCaughrain is the author of the Children's Books Ireland Book of the Year,



She is the Children's Writing Fellow for Northern Ireland #CWFNI

She also blogs at The Blank Page

@KMcCaughrain

Saturday, 20 October 2018

Writing/Reading Prologues - Joan Lennon

Recently I came across an article by Casimir Stone titled Tips for Nailing Your Novel's Prologue.  I had just finished writing a draft of one for my work-in-progress and was having doubts.  Do I like prologues in general?  Do I like this prologue specifically?  Do I even like this work-in-progress any more? 


Leonid Pasternak (1862-1945) The Passion of Creation
wiki commons
(aka "Prologue?  No prologue?")

Writers - what do you think?  Do you write prologues or avoid them like the plague?

Readers - how about you?  Do prologues intrigue or irritate?

And after reading Casimir Stone's article with extreme interest, is my own prologue getting the boot or is it here to stay?  Well, I've come down on the side of keeping it.  Will my agent agree?  That remains to be seen ...


Joan Lennon's website.
Joan Lennon's blog.
Walking Mountain.