This afternoon I will be in Cardiff, celebrating the launch
of
Mirror Magic, also know as The Book That
Nearly Killed Me.
My first two books were fantasy adventures and they were
easy to write. (If the plot starts to flag, just throw in another giant octopus.) But after my second book, my publisher wanted something new,
and my agent mentioned she’d love to read a middle-grade take on
Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell. I, with more optimism
than sense, declared that I was just the author to write it.
All went well for a while. I set about researching the
Victorian period with gusto – mainly by watching costume dramas and reading
gothic novels, but this was going to be a very alternative history. I sent in my first draft and sat back, reasonably satisfied.
Then I got a call from my editor.
“First question,” she
said, “is this book supposed to be a mystery or an adventure?”
I hadn’t even considered it – or even considered that I
ought to consider it. Weren’t they both the same thing?
“Does it make any difference?” I asked.
Yes, actually, it turned out, it made a huge difference.
Because, while adventures can swing blithely from one crisis to the next, a
mystery is an altogether different kettle of fiction. The plot must twist and
turn, you must have clues, moments of danger, clues, a formidable villain,
clues, red herrings and wrong avenues, clues… Did I mention clues?
“The pacing is a little erratic,” my editor said with
monumental understatement. “You need to go back to the start and plan out how
the information will unfold.”
That didn’t sound too hard. I made a spreadsheet. By chapter
thirteen, for example, I decided my characters needed to have learned x,y, and
z.
I added a kindly vicar to chapter thirteen. “Hello,
characters,” he said. “By the way, x, y, and z.”
“Um, this is getting better,” my editor said after I proudly
presented my second draft. “But now you need to remove the kindly vicar and
plant clues so the readers can work out what’s going on for themselves. Your
readers will enjoy feeling clever.”
I thought of all the times I’d gloated over working out a
whodunnit, and I didn’t feel so clever any more. I cut the kindly vicar and
planted clues the size of giant octopuses all over the first twelve chapters.
“It’s almost there,” my editor sighed, shuffling the
tear-stained pages of draft three. “Now you just need to make it a little more
subtle. Maybe a lot more subtle. And, by the way, the last four chapters of the
book don’t make sense.”
Of course they didn’t, because I’d spent all my time
planting clues in the first twelve chapters. I wondered if I could use my
new-found knowledge of crime to murder my editor. Given the clumsiness of my
plotting, though, I'd probably be found out immediately. I sat down to rewrite yet again.
I think we did four drafts altogether. Maybe five – or five
and a half. The whole experience was like learning to play a new
instrument. Thinking that because I could play the cello, the flute would be
easy. Some adventure elements crept into the mystery, of course. Giant
octopuses were out, but ghastly skeletons from the Unworld were a pretty good
substitute. And, because I have to have at least one sarcastic character in
every book (if it’s not written into my contract, it should be) I invented The
Book – a magical tome with an erratic ability to see the future and a huge
attitude problem.
I finished my last draft with a whole new appreciation of
different genres and the difficulties that must be inherent in each one. And
also a huge respect for my editor’s patience and persistence, her refusal to
let me get away with sloppy plotting or clumsy clues.
Mirror Magic and I had a difficult relationship but I’m
rather proud of my wayward offspring. I think if we met in the street we’d tip
our hats, nod and smile knowingly, acknowledging that the journey
was worth it in the end.
That’s the joy and challenge of writing. You’re
always learning, always pushing yourself, always trying new things. My fourth
book is well underway and it’s a bit of an oddity. After that, who knows?
Romance? Thriller? A ghost story? Or maybe I’ll really push my limits and try a
different age group. But today I’m raising my glass to Mirror Magic – the book
that made me write better.