Tuesday 29 January 2019

Coherent Driblets - Nick Garlick


For years I’ve thought that there was a formula for writing. I don’t mean the ingredients of a story – characters, action, setting – but a formula for how to write. Something along the lines of Be at the desk by such and such a time and don’t get up until you’ve produced this many words and keep going like this until the book’s done and all you have to do is polish it up for the publisher.

This may well work for Stephen King, or Neal Stephenson, or Ken Follet. William Manchester was said to be able to pound out thousands of words in punishing 18 to 24 hour marathons. Woody Allen and Edward Albee have both spoken about working the whole story out in advance and then getting it down on paper. Fast.

None of this works for me. Most weeks I write from Monday to Friday, in the mornings. I try to write 6 pages, or about 1500 words. But there are days when what I write is just rubbish. And I know it’s rubbish as I’m writing it. That’s not only really depressing, but it can stop me writing for days as a big fat cloud of What’s the point? descends.

But just a few weeks ago, I discovered this quote by Aldous Huxley in one of my favourite books. (The Writer’s Chapbook.) 







I know very dimly when I start what’s going to happen. I just have a very general idea, and then the thing develops as I write. Sometimes – and it’s happened to me more than once – I will write a great deal, then find it just doesn’t work, and have to throw the whole thing away… Things come to me in driblets, and when the driblets come I have to work hard to make them into something coherent.




Reading that felt like somebody had pulled a curtain aside and let in the light. Those words described so perfectly how I write that it could have been me saying them. And since I’ve read them, it hasn’t made my writing any easier, but it most definitely has made it easier to keep writing, getting the words down, working on them, making them better. Always making them better. Making them ‘into something coherent’.

Not to mention remembering what the late, great Harlan Ellison once said: ‘Of course it’s hard. If it were easy, everybody would do it.’

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8 comments:

Susan Price said...

Here's the formula for writing: Get words down, however you can, with whatever tools it takes, however long it takes, with whatever amount of rewriting it takes, until you finish it. Then rewrite it again, several times.

Pippa Goodhart said...

Yes, I'm a driblets person too! Love the surname Plimpton from that book cover.

Sue Purkiss said...

Welcome to ABBA, Nick!

Nick Garlick said...

Can't find a way to reply to each comment - is that possible?. - so I'll use this to say Thank You.

LuWrites said...

Great post, Nick! You've made me feel much better about my current way of writing. If you stay sitting at your desk for 12 hour stretches, you just end up with muscular skeletal problems and piles. Probably. 🙂

Nick said...

Lu,

All I've ever gained from more than five hours at the desk is exhaustion and gloom. It just doesn't work for me. And the story suffers more.

Stroppy Author said...

I'm a driblets person, too. Cue much sneering by proper planners :-)

Sue Bursztynski said...

I’m a driblet pantser too. Apart from the fact that until recently I had a full time day job and had to get up early enough to get to work without having to get up even earlier to write before leaving.