You've written -
and the editor suggests -
Or you see your piece like this -
and your editor suggests a re-write or two in order to achieve this -
It could just be me. But even if it is, do yourself a favour, and find the time to watch Ursus' TED talk below -
(Images photographed from my copy of Ursus Wehrli's Noch Mehr Kunst Aufraumem.)
Joan Lennon's website.
Joan Lennon's blog.