"So where did summer go?" asked a poet friend on Facebook as August kicked in. I was at Lumb Bank, guest author on a writing retreat, and yes - it was raining hard.
Come August in England and dawn has gone dark and chill, leaves are clogging up the gutters and the flowers are fading in the patio pots. That's the thing about summer, by August its truly fading. I even wrote a poem about it one year.
Cheating on me
Here comes August
old prostitute
flowers faded
in your red-dye hair.
You strut your
green stuff
along days
already crisp-edged
nights dark
before ten.
All through
parched June
classroom
stiff with tired bodies
I dream of
holidays
cheer myself
hoarse at sports day
comfort the
losers.
I wave my girl
off to camp
and then it’s my
turn.
August;
air laced with
your carbon cocktail.
As we shave
short the lawn
lock-up and head
for the hills
the sun angle
shifts.
In your see-through
vest
you tease us, August;
long-limbed shadow
of winter.
© Miriam Halahmy
How many writers feel like pumping out the great novel in August? Its not my best time to write, I have to admit. But if I write nothing then I feel even worse. And I’m not a big fan of the term
‘writer’s block’. It’s not that I always sit down at my desk ready to write and
bang out 2000 words a day. It’s simply that I believe it is always possible to
do a bit of writing, even if it isn’t the next chunk of the great work you had
hoped for.
But with the help of chocolate, all is not lost!
Writing this blog will be my writing for today. Some of the points below I used in a blog for Lorrie Porter's excellent blogsite last year. But somehow in August it all seems very apt to ponder it all again.
So if you are deep in August, fed up the summer is nearly over and don't feel much like writing, here are my Five Favourite Tips for rebooting the writing fervour :-
1. Write a word, write a
sentence, write something. Write with thick felt tip – my latest craze is
Sharpie pens – deface a large sheet of brown paper. Take a word from your
manuscript and brainstorm it all over the page. Writing is the trigger. Not
writing makes us feel frozen inside. We are all about words so have fun and
just write some.
2. I know, I know... writing a set of
disconnected words won’t get Chapter 14 written and you are feeling anxious and
under pressure and can’t I offer something better than Number 1?
Yes I
can! Sit down and write for 30 minutes and then get up and walk away. That
brief writing time will return your self esteem and unfreeze your writing
muscle. Do 30 minutes every day in the leanest, most uninspiring, most shut,
closed, tight periods when you feel blocked, and you will breathe new life into
your writing. You will stand up and walk away feeling, “I’ve done it,
I’ve done my writing for today and now I can load the washing, cook dinner or
watch Daytime TV without feeling guilty.”
3. Ask questions. Whenever I am
stuck in the middle of a novel and I just can’t seem to write the next 50
words, let alone 5000, I switch to Bold Deep Red and put up any question which
comes to mind. I answer each question before I put up the next one. I’m not
brainstorming questions for the sake of it. I’m letting questions take over and
trigger writing which ultimately will get me unstuck, reveal where I’m headed
next and get me back to writing in a linear flow.
Here are a few examples :
a) Why am I sitting here?
b) What has just happened?
c) Who is x or why or z?
d) What do I want to say, write,
do here on this page, in this para, in this book?
e) What do I honestly think is
going to happen next?
I haven’t found that the question
really matters. It’s a device, a trigger to trick me out back into writing. It
works, mostly.
4.
If it doesn’t work, or sometimes because it just feels better, I
go back to pen and paper. I wrote my first novel, Secret Territory, back
in the 1990s
steam- age, by hand on the kitchen table, after the kids had gone to bed.
So when I’m stuck and the writing
just isn’t pouring out of me, I go back to the old ways, the contact of pen on
paper and I start asking all my questions. Usually I find I’ve covered several
sheets in about 10 minutes, I’m ready to fire up the laptop once more and get
back on my horse.
5. I know this all sounds a bit
smug and as though I can write anytime, anywhere, with just a few nudges to get
going again. Well, I can’t.
But like most people who have
been doing this for donkey years, I have managed to find tricks and devices
which will get me out of the doldrums and off again.
Sometimes I know you just
have to call it a day or even a week. But even in the worst dry patches there’s
always something you can do.Write a poem, a shopping list, a note to teacher, a letter to your old aunt ( one of my favourites because we get so few personal letters these days)
We are writers, it's what we do, it doesn't always have to be the next great novel. But it has to involve black words on white background, strung together somehow.
Good luck with your writing and
do let us know if you have a great tip for getting unstuck.
7 comments:
Was it deliberate that the chocolate showed two approaches? A block of the big slab or a little, discrete chocolate button? I'm writing chocolate buttons this week :-)
Chocolate is always deliberate. It is the meaning of life...
Milk doesn't do it for me. It has to be the dark stuff! A little square of the Lindt suff, orange intense preferably, staves off the post lunch languor and gets my fingers moving across the page. Nice post, Miriam. Thanks.
All Cheap chocolate contains hydrogenated vegetable oil, which are probably bad for you, and is definitely bad for orangutans.
You owe it to the planet, and your health, to only ever buy expensive chocolate.
If I remember correctly, Lindt is about the cheapest that you should allow yourself to buy.
Ouch. Sorry for the horrible grammar fail in that comment.
"Writing is the trigger" - thanks Miriam - everything you've written makes sense to me. Thanks for sharing August with us.
Great tips Miriam and so glad the chocolate's Cadbury's - the only bar worth the calories in my opinion:)
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